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Villanelle

  • Feb 21, 2025
  • 1 min read

I find I do not like the villanelle

Its tercet chording seems to go astray

It’s English verse’s entrance to a hell.

 

Its rhythms seem to cast a broken spell

Its metres do not seem to dance or play

I find I do not like the villanelle.

 

Strange sounds echo as in a well

Something within its bloodstream seems to say

It’s English verse’s entrance to a hell.

 

It needs a rhythmic change, a living bell

A change of pattern that will change the lay

I find I do not like the villanelle.

 

Caught up within its own mephitic smell

It cloys like tilth packed into foetid clay

It’s English verse’s entrance to a hell.

 

Say, can you find a useful way to dwell

Within its sick arrhythmia, I pray.

I find I do not like the villanelle

It’s English verse’s entrance to a hell



 
 

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